Helloooooooooooooo everyone! My name is Gerardo Bastidas,
I’m 18 years old, I was born in
Mazatlan, Sinaloa on January 25th, I have lived all my life there,
and I’ve never get bored of it, I could spent all my life in Mazatlan, but now
I’m living in Monterrey because I started to study Financial Management this semester in
Tecnologico de Monterrey.
I still have my
parents, one brother, and one sister; I also have a dog called Bono. Actually
my parent’s still living in Mazatlan. My father’s name is Adrian Bastidas, he’s
an architect and my mother’s name is Martha, she’s a housewife, my brother also
is called Adrian and he is living in Culiacan where he’s working with my dad
and finally my sister Paulina who is studying here in Monterrey in UDEM, now
I’m living with her.
I’m really happy
with this decision that I made, to come to Monterrey to study my career. I made
this decision without any pressure of my parents because they always give me
all their support in every decision that I made until now.
Bastidas, Your blog is very good. Be careful with punctuation. Please make the following corrections I wrote in capital letters:
ResponderEliminarThird line: I get bored of it, I'VE NEVER GOTTEN BORED LIVING THERE. I could HAVE spent ...
Line 4: AT THE TECNOLOGICE (not in)
line 6: PERIOD after sister.
Line 7: ...my parents ARE STILL LIVING...
period after Adrian Bastidas. He's....
period after Martha. She's...... period after housewife. My is also NAMED (not called=
line 9: comma after Culiacan, where
Line 10 comma after Paulina, who is..... at the UDEM. I am living with her.
Line 11: erase the comma after that I made to come...... to study my MAJOR (not career)
Line 12..... pressure FROM my ... (not of my)
las line: that I HAVE MADE (not I made)
Bastidas, Your blog is very good. Be careful with punctuation. Please make the following corrections I wrote in capital letters:
ResponderEliminarThird line: I get bored of it, I'VE NEVER GOTTEN BORED LIVING THERE. I could HAVE spent ...
Line 4: AT THE TECNOLOGICE (not in)
line 6: PERIOD after sister.
Line 7: ...my parents ARE STILL LIVING...
period after Adrian Bastidas. He's....
period after Martha. She's...... period after housewife. My is also NAMED (not called=
line 9: comma after Culiacan, where
Line 10 comma after Paulina, who is..... at the UDEM. I am living with her.
Line 11: erase the comma after that I made to come...... to study my MAJOR (not career)
Line 12..... pressure FROM my ... (not of my)
las line: that I HAVE MADE (not I made)
I don't know why it was published twice.
ResponderEliminar